Friday, February 12, 2010

Disheartened Soul

THRU D STREETS OF LIFE I WAS WALKING ALONE,
AND D DIM MOON LIGHT FAINTLY SHONE…

BROKEN HEART ,DISHEARTENED SOUL,
I STILL DUNNO HOW I MISSED MY GOAL…

EFFORT WERE FULL,CONFIDENCE WAS NO LESS,
BUT STILL SOMEHOW-SOMEHOW I MADE A MESS…

ITS DIFFICULT TO GET UP AND WALK ONCE AGAIN,
HONESTLY LEMME TELL U,ITS A BITTER VERY BITTER PAIN…

I NEED UR HAND,TO WALK FOR A WHILE,
TO MEND MY HEART AND ONCE AGAIN SMILE…

YEAH.. I CAN FEEL A HAND ON MY FOREHEAD,
THANQ GOD,ELSE UR CHILD WUD HAVE BEEN DEAD….
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2010 at 7:10 PM

    awesome stuff pallavi...

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  2. palFebruary 12, 2010 at 7:22 PM

    thnku...:) :)

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  3. yugalFebruary 12, 2010 at 8:24 PM

    hmmmm... whr ws dis talent al dis while!!!!!
    gr8 attempt....

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  4. kritikaFebruary 13, 2010 at 3:56 AM

    good one :)

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  5. palFebruary 13, 2010 at 4:11 AM

    thnkx yugal..thanku ma'am.....

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  6. NeelakshiFebruary 13, 2010 at 4:17 AM

    bhuuuut achi hai..seriously kafi feel ati hai..tbi itne FOLLOWERS b mil gye :D

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  7. rishabhforuMarch 21, 2010 at 12:53 AM

    awsm... beautiful lynes...

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  8. UnknownApril 13, 2010 at 4:56 AM

    gr8 attemt!! hope to see more of these lines and poems from your end..keep up the good work and enjoy..

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